Write a better tagline
What’s a better therapy tagline?
When the world gives you obstacles, find your way through
or...
Helping busy doers find their legacy
The first tagline could be about any therapist. The second tagline is much more specific to the value Christopher Brown, LICSW provides.
The key to writing a good tagline is to explain who you serve (busy doers) and how you help them (find their legacy) as simply as possible.
Here are some more copywriting tips from Harry at Marketing Examples, one of my favorite newsletters.